图表式带数字比较的作文(1)
As is described in the bar chart,(图表的总述).Figures indicate that(趋势1),and(趋势2)。
There are at least three good reasons for(图表总述的另一个种表达)。
In the first place,it is generally assumed that(理由一)。Secondly,with the open and reform policy being carried out,(某个短语)has a great influence on(原因)。Last but not least,today an increasing number of people are realizing that(某个原因的重要性 )。Maybe there are some other reasons to show(图表述第三种表
达),but it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable.
From this point of view,it goes without saying that(措施)。We are looking forward to a much better and brighter future.
评注:这个框架是送给那些对作文信心不大的朋友们。我框架的内容已经有90几个字了,只需要大家填补40-50个字就够了。
图表式作文带数字比较,并希望提出建议的作文 (2)
As is depicted in the cartoon,(图表的总述)。For one thing,(趋势一)。For another,(趋势2)。It is interesting to note that(趋势三)。
My suggestions to tackle the problem are as follows.First of all,with the rapid development of science and technology,an increasing number of people come
to realize that(意见一),this is because(原因)。Secondly,(意见二)。
Therefore,we should attach great significance to solving the problem.
As far as I'm concerned,it is high time that (某个组织或人)must make intensive efforts to(采取什么行动)。Although we still have a long way to go,I
am sure that tomorrow will be much better and brighter.
评注:上一篇是着重强调原因,这篇是原因和改善的措施并进的。还是考虑到大家时间紧迫,所以这篇的框架词也有90以上。
大家很强烈要求的议论文写法(3)(我采用新式写法,和旧的不同)
It is generally believed that (事件)is a hot topic which is widely talked
about at home and abroad.Some people think that(想法一)。Others argue that(想法
二)。Still others assert that(想法三)。
As a popular saying goes"Everything has two sides".There is no denying that(什
么had contributions to什么)。But it is partial to stress only one side.we should debate the matter pro and con.Though(什么好的事情已经发生),they are responsible for a lot of(不好的事情)。From what I have mentioned above we can see clearly that(结论)。
In short,we should keep in mind that(全文的结论)。We are looking forwarding to a promising future.
评注:这篇文章的框架CET46都可以拿过去改头换面。一般这样的文章,大多数人都会第一段写2意见,然后说自己的意见。第2段说3个理由。我就是为了打破这个瓶颈,所以在第一段列了3个理由,然后第2段从正反两方面论证。力求新意。这篇文章我拼了很多东西,也是我老喜欢的议论文的写法
图表带数字的描述(举2篇比较经典文章的开头)
Since China opened its door to the outside world in 1979, Beijing has made
remarkable results in attracting foreign business to invest in joint ventures.
According to the pie chart, the investors in different enterprises come from 26
countries and regions. The investment of Hong Kong ranks first, accounting for
44 per cent of the total. Japan's investment makes up 19.2 per cent, putting
it in second spot. Third is the United States at 16 per cent.
评注:这篇文章是说北京地区吸引外商投资的,是一块饼图,然后首段要大家描述。
我简单分析一下,第一句只要把北京换成our country,然后是百搭。第2句的开头是常用土图表作文的框架,后面部分看看,考试碰不到同样的文章。后面的三句描写手法是我要着重推荐的。第三句用了accounting for,第四句用了make up,第5句用了at。这3个词都有“占多少百分比”的意思。如果考到这类的作文能用上这3个字,再加上漂亮的首句。老师的第一印象很定来。从第二段开始,按照前面的表格,大家慢慢套
As is shown by the graph, the rate of car accidents in the city varied from
month to month in 2002. During the period from Jan. to Mar., the number of
accidents grew sharply, reaching 32 in March. Then the rate began to decline,
and there were only 26 accidents in June. However, there was a rapid increase
during the summer months, the peak being 39 accidents in August. Fortunately,
the rate was gradually falling in the last four months of the year. It is
interesting to note that there happened to be as many accidents in Oct. as
those in Apr. Generally speaking, the trend involved a downward direction.
评注:这篇文章是说一年12个月,每月的车祸数量。我要推荐的除了表示“占百分比”的表达外,还要介绍如果描写趋势的。如果是上升,那可以用grew sharply,on the ris,be a rapid increase.如果是下降,可以用begin to decline,be gradually falling.如果考试是用曲线表示趋势的话,那能用上这5个次中的任意3个,文章就有色彩了。
成功和失败的关系
As you know, whatever we do, there are always two possible results: success and
failure. We should try hard to strive for success and at the same time do our
best to avoid failure. We should rely on our own efforts to win the victory. We
have no reason to look to any accidental gain. We should always keep in mind
that industry is the mother of success and perseverance holds the key to it.